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Mr. Enter, and Porygon-Z.

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Awhile back ago, Mr. Enter asked me if I could vector him as a Pokemon Trainer, he also wanted me to add a Porygon-Z by his side since that was his favorite Pokemon.:D
So I accepted his offer, and finally after many long months, I've gotten it done!:D

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Mr.Enter, and Porygon-Z/Flutterflyraptor


Pokémon/Gamefreak/Nintendo/1995.
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Alright. As soon as I open the page I see a problem. The head is way too short. It doesn't look natural at all. I would recommend either increasing the height of the top of the head, or move the features. And that brings me onto another problem. The eyes. They are way too far spaced to make the head look natural. The same goes with the ears, they are way too far out, they look like they're a monkey's ears, not a human's. The left hand is very disproportionate. If you're trying to make it look like his fist is up, try looking at reference pictures, or actually looking at yourself. Excluding the head and the left hand, you did pretty well with the anatomy. The sleeves and the shading of the arms are actually really well done, but, the middle piece of the shirt looks like it was thrown together. Once again, look at some reference photos. So basically, study your head and your clothes, and you should have masterful artwork.