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My third Rainbow Dash vector, upgraded version.by *Flutterflyraptor

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This is the upgraded version to my original vector

Here is the things that I improved.

1. Rainbow Dash's left eye was improved, and she doesn't have that noticed spot on under her left eye.

2. Rainbow Dash's right eye, has also been improved

3. The outlines around Rainbow Dash's mane, and both wings have been improved

4. Rainbow Dash's ear, has also been improved

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Rainbow Dash/Flutterflyraptor

Friendship is magic/Lauren Faust/Hasbro/2010.

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Submitted on: September 17, 2012
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Resolution: 2258×1450

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Critique by ~Rubez2525 Sep 17, 2012, 5:54:26 PM

Ok, first off, I'm going to be super-critical only to help you to make your vectors as good as possible. Some of what I'm about to say is advice that someone had given me for my vectors. Also, very good on doing an original pose, that is something I have yet to accomplish. Now to point out those flaws:

1. Rounded ends: There is no rounded ends in ponies, so in all of the spots where a stroke ends, you need to make a point. For example, at the end of the chin, the ends of the nose, where the ear meets the head, where the legs meet the body, at the end of the overlapping stroke on the front legs, where the belly ends (stroke to the left of the cutie mark), on the bottom corners of the feathers, all corners of the tail/mane, etc. ALL need to have a pointy tip.

2. There seems to be a lot of "wobbliness" here. I would suggest trying to use as few anchor points as possible, also using the pen tool will help out a lot if your not already using it.

3. There is no gradients, highlights or accents on the eyes.

4. It looks like the tail is connected to her back, I would suggest moving it or reshape her rump.

Overall, it's good, but there is still some kinks to iron out.

What do you think?

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Critique by ~jaytizzle Sep 17, 2012, 5:38:06 PM

Looks nice. The only two main things I notice are: her eyes seem to be missing a gradient (as far as I can tell), and her ear doesn't have that curved piece in the middle. Her tail looks great, nice job on that (that's a tough part). I'd be interested to know what program you're using: I can offer some additional advice if it's Inkscape, but the others not as much. And Deviantart is telling me this is too short, so I will write some things. Blah blah blah blah yeah yah yo yow yup yay yoo. Okay, it's happy. Again, nice vector