very nice love this pic it not every other picture this is a pic I hardly see for its pinkie pie mad and I love it wow I really love it would love to see more like this and more work from you have great potential and would love to have a image for me for I was swept away by your image and for that I give you five for every thing for that is how great it is and I shall give you a lama just for how great this image is cant wait for more love your work thanks for reading my review
The cutie mark is squizhed a little to much. There's some small ruff edges around the eyes and legs. And theres too many eye-lids. Other than that good. Sorry if i miss spelled anything, have a nice day. (since that was all i could place my finger on and the minnimum is 100 words's im just gona say random stuff. blbokfblfobllb cheezcake is delightful on a wensday btw nice haircut. other than that fluf. but only in small doses because too much cake make you fat. and fat is bad, in some country's it's good though. so make sure fat when you'r there. )
Few pointers: Check a color guide cause her colors are a bit dark, cutiemark should be smaller and not squashed, use strokes for outlines so they have consistent thickness, and close all outline strokes to a tapered point.
After that looks good, keep at it. I need to make some more vectors (my friend wont get off my back about A picture I'm making for him).