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My first vector of Rarity. by Flutterflyraptor My first vector of Rarity. by Flutterflyraptor
This is my vector of the cartoon character, Rarity:)

Vectors.

Rarity/Flutterflyraptor

Friendship is magic/Lauren Faust/Hasbro/2010.
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I'm afraid I am an amateur artist, but I do see this as a pretty good attempt at a My Little Pony. Rarity, in this she looks like a G1 or G3 pony. I don't know what you were going for, but overall, it works. Are you ready for some criticism?

The fore-legs are too straight. Her horn is on the top of her skull when it should be on her forehead. The eyes are too circular, they are not roughly egg/almond shaped like Rarity's.

But, keep working at it, and soon you'll be drawing like a BOSS! Keep up the good work.
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Critique by Solarblaze-cat Dec 11, 2012, 10:33:26 PM
Nice vector! It looks good for a first attempt. I like how you used a clean lineart to do this picture.
Alright, ready for some critique now? To start it off, her forelegs are too straight, they sorta curve some more. Talking about the legs, they are also pretty short compared to the body, you should lengthen them a wee bit, or make the body a bit thinner. Now, to her horn. You should have put it on her forehead, but in the picture it is smack on top - but you can fix that problem easily. However, a problem hard to fix would be her mane. Her mane is made up of beautiful curls. Some artists say it is hard to draw, but practice makes perfect. Her eyes are to round, when rarity's eyes are suppose to be almond-shaped. To finish things off, I also want to point out the ear shape. It looks kind of sharp and unnatural and appears to branch out of her skull. It should be relaxed and nestle cuddly next to her mane. And that's it! That's all I have to say about this. Hope this critique helped! Oh, and here's a reference picture to help you with drawing rarity: [link]
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jeh517 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Are you going to do G1 style designs of Rainbow,Fluttershy,Applejack,and Pinkie?
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
I'll try?:D
Depends on if the fans won't get all butthurt because, the hate G1?:(
Which is ashame really!:(
I used to love watching G1, back in the late 80's!:D
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jeh517 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
That's wonderful! Which one will you do next?
Don't listen to those people that G1.
And so did I.
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Yeah, I remember seeing G1, with my older sister, back in the late 1980's!:D

My favorite pony from G1, was Wind Whistler!:D
She was just awesome!:D

Minus that one episode, that she was in!:(

I was a fan of Unicorns, but the Pegasi always seem to comfort me?:D
weird?:(

I also, really loved both Firefly, and Paradise!:D
Oops!
There I go again!:(

But please don't get me wrong!
I also love both Fizzy, and Gusty!:D
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jeh517 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
So which G1 style of the remaining Mane Six of G4 will you do next?
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Well?

I'm going to have to think about it, I'll let you know when it's done!:D
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jeh517 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
You mean when their done.

BTW those pics are for a MLP fic based on the crazy face from the Too Many Pinkie Pies episode that I'm trying to find someone who will do it for me.
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Hmm, wasn't Pinkie Pie originally a winged Pegasus named, Surprise?
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ZeroPegasi Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Rarity from Pony Tales?
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MJNSEIFER Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
She looks a little like Glory here, I hope you don'tmind me saying.
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