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My fifth Twilight Sparkle, vector. by Flutterflyraptor My fifth Twilight Sparkle, vector. by Flutterflyraptor
I've made this, because you hardly ever, see Twilight Sparkle rear up:(

In fact, I think she only reared up one time, in a episode of season one, called A Dog and Pony Show?

But I could be wrong?

So I thought it would be nice, if I've vectored Twilight Sparkle, rearing up:)

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Twilight Sparkle/Flutterflyraptor


Friendship is magic/Lauren Faust/Hasbro/2010.
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:iconapple-jack1000:
This is very nice indeed considering the fact I've never seen her in this pose before. I loved how you placed her in a wonderful pose capturing her alicorn inner and self confidence. Its like she's ready to chow-down.
I would like to begin writing this critique of how far you've have achieved so much here on deviantART and as your friend I've been browsing around your gallery to see your vector work and they simply improving each and every step. This is what makes me so happy. I have read a couple of vectoring tutorials teaching me the basics of the program and how to fill and stoke, such and such etc. Even though I haven't really taken vectoring as an art I have developed a fill skills of it and when I get older I'll soon take it as one of artistic hobbies.
Now, I loved how you made your lines smooth and know how each of the lines get thinner as it reaches up the legs. The last vector I have seen out of you (the fluttershy one) to be honest, the lines were a tiny bit thick but you have improved on this deviation of Twilight which makes me very proud.
The only thing that bothers me about this deviation is her nose, hows its far too big but the rest is basically perfect.
I wish you 'good luck' to your future deviations.
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Overall I believe that you've made a really good vector however there are a few mistakes that you should fix.

1. this one is consistent in a lot of your vectors you keep leaving the eyebrow tip as a but however it should end in a miter.
2.you missed an eyelash on the left eye from our perspective
3. this is also partly a question, did you just flip her tail upside down? cause it does appear to be bending the correct way.
4. you may need to find a better cutie mark vector the stars down the bottom are a bit elongated.
and last thing i will note the tongue normally ends slightly outside the red part of the mouth.

hope this helps you to improve

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KnightTeutonic
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Nina-Dragons-12 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how goes everyone get the cutie mark just so?
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:iconmlpfimrox:
MLPFiMRox Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
Adding to a brony community-related fanfic.
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:iconprussiabrony22:
PrussiaBrony22 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
may i use this
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
As long, as you give credit!:D
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:iconprussiabrony22:
PrussiaBrony22 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
ok thnx ^^
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:iconsecretagentjonathon:
SecretAgentJonathon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So, I used this here: [link]
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:iconpwnysauce:
Pwnysauce Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I make this into a base? 
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Sure, as long, as you give credit!:D
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:icontwilightmagicsparkle:
I made a paper version of this. :D twilightmagicsparkle.deviantar…
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:iconyaysisters:
YAYSISTERS Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
May I use this for a wallpaper?
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Sure, go right ahead!:)
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:iconim-rarity:
im-rarity Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
I put David Tennant on this 

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:iconheloww:
Heloww Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pretty Nice vector.
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:iconchillybilly4:
ChillyBilly4 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student Artist
Sorry my friend typed that. O.O
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:iconchillybilly4:
ChillyBilly4 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student Artist
you all are welcome that i left a comment
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:iconcassidypony:
CassidyPony Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't approve of Twilight being an alicorn but this is a very nice vector.
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thanks:)
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:iconcassidypony:
CassidyPony Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your very welcome. ^^
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:iconechodonut:
Echodonut Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks nice :)
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha cool :)
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Thanks:)
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yw :D
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KillerMuffin096 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful! Nice work. :)
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Thanks:)
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:iconkillermuffin096:
KillerMuffin096 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You are very welcome! :)
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MightyMorphinPower4 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Cute
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:iconmyfutureis100:
Myfutureis100 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
This is awesome! Although, I think it would look better if Twilight's tail was facing downwards. Isn't she bigger as an Alicorn? Sorry, I'm not sure. :)
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
No, she's actually smaller then both Princess Celestia, and Princess Luna:)

As for her tail?

If it was aimed downwards in this pose, then the tail would've gone through the floor!

Although, I could've had it arch over the ground, but I love it this way:)
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hannah10123 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Actually, he/she means did she get a lil' taller? and the answer is: yes.
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Oh, okay, I didn't know:)
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:iconhannah10123:
hannah10123 Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It's ok
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:iconmyfutureis100:
Myfutureis100 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Yeah, I know she's the smallest alicorn. But, didn't she get bigger when she transformed from a unicorn into an alicorn.? Oh, I didn't think the floor would go through the floor. :P LOL
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
What I mean is, her tail would be too long, longer then her back legs!

Plus, tails are very light, so having it move, when she's rearing like that, wouldn't surprise me:)
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Myfutureis100 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Oh, okay. Thank you. :)
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AZ-Derped-Unicorn Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome Vector!
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Thanks:)
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AZ-Derped-Unicorn Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome :D
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:iconnbgodzilla86:
nbgodzilla86 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
awesome job on her i like it
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Thanks:)
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:iconnbgodzilla86:
nbgodzilla86 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
you're welcome
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SpiritBrony Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
This is very nice work! :iconbrohoofplz: I Love Twilight :icontwilightlaplz:
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Thanks:)
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SpiritBrony Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Your so welcome :D
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HeartinaThePony Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow!
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:iconstriker-666:
Striker-666 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
I honestly like Twilight Sparkle as an alicorn.
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:iconflutterflyraptor:
Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Me too:)
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darkoverlords Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
She looks evil and I like it.
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Me too:)
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TheLunarQueen Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Professional General Artist
I think this is a great vector! I can't remember seeing her rear up D: She should more! It looks great!
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Flutterflyraptor Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
Thanks:)
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