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My fifth Twilight Sparkle, vector.

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I've made this, because you hardly ever, see Twilight Sparkle rear up:(

In fact, I think she only reared up one time, in a episode of season one, called A Dog and Pony Show?

But I could be wrong?

So I thought it would be nice, if I've vectored Twilight Sparkle, rearing up:)

Vector.

Twilight Sparkle/Flutterflyraptor


Friendship is magic/Lauren Faust/Hasbro/2010.
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Sir-Teutonic-Knight's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Overall I believe that you've made a really good vector however there are a few mistakes that you should fix.

1. this one is consistent in a lot of your vectors you keep leaving the eyebrow tip as a but however it should end in a miter.
2.you missed an eyelash on the left eye from our perspective
3. this is also partly a question, did you just flip her tail upside down? cause it does appear to be bending the correct way.
4. you may need to find a better cutie mark vector the stars down the bottom are a bit elongated.
and last thing i will note the tongue normally ends slightly outside the red part of the mouth.

hope this helps you to improve

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KnightTeutonic